amazing!
amazing!
Thank you!
Who embeds a youtube version on a Newgrounds animation?
Edit: Come at me with something better than a whatev emoji
It was for people who cannot see the Newgrounds player on their device for whatever reason. I've changed it to just a link now.
Edit: I just came at you with a ROFL emoji. Hope that's better :D
So many great things, the art, animation, voice acting, backgrounds and story is very top notch but the pacing is really pushing me away from this series. every movement seems needlessly padded. Usually when i watch serious animated shorts on here I tell people to slow down for a better tone, but this just drags at every moment.
Thanks for that insight! That's something that I really need to touch upon going forward. Don't want to make it feel needlessly lengthy.
Up-front: I haven't seen any promo material for DS so I assume this is note-for-note identical to it's trailer? That said, this was amazing. I loved seeing the Mario universe with this tone. Everything was executed perfectly
its mostly "inspired" off, but not down to exact scenes.
"loosely inspired" to make the mario theme make sense
Everything you make is about getting others to hate some popular thing you don't like. Just some attempt at lowering the net enjoyment on the planet. What a complete waste of talent.
Maybe if you at least said why you hate things, instead of just saying it's bad, there would be a point to sharing it. But you're not, you say nothing of substance and therefore avoid any accountability
it's like you didn't watch the video.
Great movie, real tense and atmospheric.
Thanks for opening up to feedback
im sorry i should of been more reasonable i react like that because i work sooo hard on it but now i will learn how to take criticism from now on
Some of the best animation I've seen on NG and the story was really cool. Everything came together, keep it up!
Thank you!
a decent loop but it does nothing for me on it's own
That is fair, it is small in scope after all. For me it is more the context of how this was created that makes it "worth" of being my first uploaded animation.
Because it a way, it is my first finished animation that is not just completely shenanigans.
This was really nice! I really dig the live action animation style and you executed it nicely. some parts had me laughing, unfortunately most of the jokes are overdone, and I saw them coming.
It's clear a lot of effort went into this and I have a feeling this show will improve greatly as you continue to work on it.
Thanks man! Episode 2 will be released soon and has more surprises, I am curious what you will think of that one. We've learned a lot from these first two episodes, so hopefully we will see that reflected in the future episodes.
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